Revision and Reseeing

To show my revising skills I chose to use the third essay we were assigned. This was the essay about how different traditions have been challenged. I had alot of things going on while I was writing this paper so I read over it mulitple times to ensure I found all my mistakes. The mistakes I did find were run on sentneces, misspelling, and sentences that just did not make sence. I did not have an outsider read it over for me, I normally would have. When you have someone else read over your work with fresh eyes they may spot things you had missed.